Friday, December 31, 2010

i'm....

I'M drunk.
yes! I am.
They say,
You shouldn't speak
when drunk
OK! I won't.
FUCK! I'll write.
Yes, I will.
I want to write.
But i can't.
Words elude me,
when i wish,
they'd espouse me, the most!
They do.
This treachery of words,
I fail to comprehend.
oh, I so don't understand.
Perhaps, these two had a fight-
words and 'Old Monk'
I am sure they did.
Chuck it. Let 'em fight.
I don't want to write.
Not Anymore!!

7 comments:

IRFANUDDIN said...

U hav ur own style of writing...poetry is something with which u can express much, using few words....and u did that well...
i often try for a poetry, but in the end it becomes a prose...:P

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TU SAPNE DE NA DE ..PER NEEND DE-DE"
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vineet said...

new to blogging bt old to wrds usage..nice ly written bro..hope to see more frm u

Fatte said...

@irfan- thanks irfan bhai. naye saal ki shubhakaamnayein. sure i'll go through your posts :)

@vineet- thanks bro :)

MM said...

ha ha ha! that was a surprise! I am glad you were drunk . in fact so drunk so as to shed yur inhibitions or else we wouldn't have known about yur talent in poetry

Fatte said...

haha... thank u mani ji :)

Always Happy said...

nicely written pranjal...peekey bhi itna acha kaise likh saktey ho????

Fatte said...

thank u for liking it AH :):)
i thought it was lame :P